All around the ride is stuffy and sinky with old corn dogs, stail nachos, and sticky cotton candy. the railing is sticky and greasey from little children and their cotton covered hands. impatient parents swiftly gave their bratty children a nasty look. However, the children just simply disregard the look and continue to be pests. eager customers wait with impatience as the line moves an inch every two to three minutes. the person on the oud speaker (hardly loud at all because it was deeply muffled by the crowd) said something a loong the lines of "PLEASE DO NOT STAND, SIT, WALK ON THE RAILING. PLEASE STAY CALM ON THE RIDE. KEEP YOUR HANDS AND FEET IN THE RIDE AT ALL TIMES. THANK YOU AND ENJOY YOUR RIDE." you could probally only catch about forth of that by the way.
     as the line crept up the broken cement walkway, you couyld hear the screams of people fly by as their adrenaline raises in their bodies over coming them, making them overcome anything. The shawdow of the ride was a blur, like how some halloween stores want you to feel when you see their products.
I'll finish this story later.
so. actually there has been a change of plans:

So my best friend ever, Kathryn, she loves this guy named Edward Elric. So for all you anime love in anime club sorry but Edward is taken. You all should remember Kathryn because she shadowed me last Monday. So for all you people that don't know about Fullmetal Alchemist here is the jist of it. So there is this kid named Edward who has a younger bro named Al and so their mom dies when they are like 9 and their dad left when they were tiny so they don't know him. So they want to bring their mom back to life, by using alchemy. The number one rule in alchemy is that you must have inequivalent exchange. So they use their DNA to try to bring her back but it doesn't work, because the Truth takes Al's body and Edward's leg. When Edward realizes what happened he goes back to save his brother but the price he paid was he had to give up his right arm. So Al ends up in a suite of armor that was lying around in there basement. Edward ends up getting automail from this really annoying girl name Winry. She is such a mean person and she beats up Edward all the time. I personally think she should die because she is just that horrid.

Anyways... When Edward is 12 he becomes a state alchemist and meets Roy Mustang. He is pretty cool but stuck on himself. Hawkeye though is the coolest. She is amazing with guns. Well if you want to know more you should read it or watch the OLD anime because in the new one Edward's hair looks funny. But it is an awesome manga, but not as good as Naruto.